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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-05-22 03:37 PM

I am
caught up
caught in
caught
live and wiggling

rapt in rap I can
wrap it up
just fine

and in solitary
am I not woman enough
to please a man
who is playing
solitary
and playing on
in a play of life
yet displays rife

his content in his
con’s tent
where his just is
spent
or was justice
intent

that this life be spent
intense
and in like or not
this time misspent

in pent-up
frustrations
raging
against
sage advice that still
echoes his vices
through no particular
ad at all….

all the while,
wondering
if who he is caused
me to be who
I am

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

1 posted 2001-05-22 04:28 PM

Decaflame,

A very interesting piece from you. I would guess that who he is caused you to be "part" of who you are. After all, we are part of all that we have known.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-05-22 04:51 PM

Like this one

Titia

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

3 posted 2001-05-22 04:59 PM

Lots of nice rhyming, which I love. *S* And then ending was...powerful.

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

4 posted 2001-05-22 05:35 PM

Dastardly fellow, he ...

Moonstruck

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-05-22 05:39 PM

done so well..I liked the play on words...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-06 07:53 AM

this was a tongue twister for me-LOL! well done

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-06-06 08:27 AM

interesting series... word play in this is enjoyable even though the emotional content is painful..and yes we are..all who we are...in part because of who we are or have been with

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