Open Poetry #14 |
Alone |
short_stuff03469 New Member
since 2001-06-03
Posts 6 |
I smile. I frown. Yet I don’t see you around. I laugh. I cry. I wait for you all night. When things go right, I search for you. When things go wrong, I yearn for you. But, you do not come. You are not there. In my brightest hours, I wait to share with you. In my darkest hours, I wait to mourn with you. Still, you do not come. You are not there. When my days are dark and gray, You cannot stay. When my days are happy and bright, You are out of sight. No matter how long I wait for you, You do not come. You are not there. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I like this one allot, well done! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad but the point arrives on the page well...thanks! |
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Just A Man Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 15Pain |
Sadly too many of us know love only as empty lies on a backdrop of betrayel how the users find their prey I cannot begin to answer "In daring to dream, offering life,I am sentenced to life as a Deadman walking. Such ends all Love given." [This message has been edited by Just A Man (edited 06-04-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Welcome to Passions, the place where friends share their laughs and sorrow. Nice write Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Well done...and welcome to Passions! |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Delightful, Thank you for the read, and welcome Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
enjoyed very much,welcome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I hope you find your way around with ease, if not, the moderators at here to answer any and all questions... Have fun, and write on! Karilea |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
So sad but I have been there, and actually I still am! A great write though. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi ShortStuff, Can understand this one very well, wonderful first post and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, we are here all of the time so write on my friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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