Open Poetry #14 |
Summer Senryu [or Haiku, take your pick] |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
~*~ Fireflies and crickets Brightening songs in thickets Lending summer dreams ~*~ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful, and I think this is a Haiku. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...you are right...I've been on such a Senryu roll I forgot where I was... ah well.... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
The lights and sounds of earth awakening from a long winter's slumber. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely, lovely and I think the last line makes it a senryu because it personifies summer giving it dreams. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love this haiku! makes summer seem so comfy... hugs, g no i wont be afraid. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I think it's Haiku & Senryu. Beautifully done. PM |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...it's a SENKYU Thank you everyone! |
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