Summer Senryu [or Haiku, take your pick]

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Open Poetry #14

Summer Senryu [or Haiku, take your pick]

Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-06-18 09:17 AM

~*~

Fireflies and crickets
Brightening songs in thickets
Lending summer dreams

~*~

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-18-2001).]

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-18 09:25 AM

Wonderful, and I think this is a Haiku.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-18-2001).]

Sunshine

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2 posted 2001-06-18 09:28 AM

LOL...you are right...I've been on such a Senryu roll I forgot where I was...

ah well....

Auguste

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By the sea

3 posted 2001-06-18 01:03 PM

The lights and sounds of earth awakening from a long winter's slumber.

Michael

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VAS
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Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-18 01:11 PM

Lovely, lovely, lovely and I think the last line makes it a senryu because it personifies summer giving it dreams.

dgvarner
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5 posted 2001-06-18 01:16 PM

love this haiku! makes summer seem so comfy...

hugs, g

no i wont be afraid.
no i...wont be afraid,
just as long
as you stand,
stand by me...
-ben e king

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6 posted 2001-06-18 01:25 PM

I think it's Haiku & Senryu. Beautifully done.

PM

Sunshine

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7 posted 2001-06-18 01:27 PM

LOL...it's a

SENKYU

Thank you everyone!

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