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0 posted 2001-06-18 09:17 AM


~*~

Fireflies and crickets
Brightening songs in thickets
Lending summer dreams

~*~


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1 posted 2001-06-18 09:25 AM


Wonderful, and I think this is a Haiku.

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2 posted 2001-06-18 09:28 AM


LOL...you are right...I've been on such a Senryu roll I forgot where I was...

ah well....

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3 posted 2001-06-18 01:03 PM


The lights and sounds of earth awakening from a long winter's slumber.  

Michael

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4 posted 2001-06-18 01:11 PM


Lovely, lovely, lovely and I think the last line makes it a senryu because it personifies summer giving it dreams.
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5 posted 2001-06-18 01:16 PM


love this haiku!  makes summer seem so comfy...  

hugs, g

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6 posted 2001-06-18 01:25 PM


I think it's Haiku & Senryu.  Beautifully done.

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7 posted 2001-06-18 01:27 PM


LOL...it's a

SENKYU

Thank you everyone!

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