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Auguste
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0 posted 2001-06-14 07:05 PM


To Taste Each Curve of You

by Michael


If I kiss my hand
and press it to your lips,
will you feel the warmth
the wetness,
taste and feel
the heat of my breath?

That I could give
you a real kiss,
but I know
how hard it would be
to stop at just a kiss.

I want more
and always have.
Did you know that
of me?

Did you know
how much I long
to taste each curve of you,
to trace your form
with my very breathing?

One night when it was late
I came to your door
to say hello.
You answered
and let me in.

You were dressed
in a translucent
blue gown
that fell to your feet.
At times, the light
would catch it just right
and it became transparent.
Oh my...

Being friends,
you excused your immodesty.
My eyes explored
your rosy skin beneath.
My throat felt parched.
I wanted you then
more than you could realize.


I want you now.
I can’t get
that night out of my mind.

May I kiss you?

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

© Copyright 2001 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-14 07:21 PM


michael...this IS beautiful...such longing in those lips...helen
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2 posted 2001-06-14 07:39 PM


Scandalous!!! But absolutely wonderful! Such longing, such desire. I wish I could feel as enraptured as you.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

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3 posted 2001-06-14 07:59 PM


wow........you know how to make a girl *sigh*....
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4 posted 2001-06-14 08:07 PM


Distracting images...beautiful write!
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5 posted 2001-06-14 08:20 PM


Oh tantalizing........
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6 posted 2001-06-14 09:27 PM


now this is a memory that anyone would love to wait for. . .

supremely sensual Michael. . .

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7 posted 2001-06-14 09:37 PM


Wow Michael!! The sensuality really showed in this piece of writing.  I loved it.....Sue

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8 posted 2001-06-14 09:42 PM



Oooooh...very sensually beautiful!
I love how you start off with the mentioning of a kiss and end it with that idea again~  

Take care,
Melissa~

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9 posted 2001-06-14 10:10 PM


Very sensual.. is it warm in here?

Elizabeth Anne

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10 posted 2001-06-15 05:25 PM


Helen,
Thank you for coming by to read this.  I'm glad you liked it.  

Secret Whisper,
Scandalous? LOL   Hey, I just have a good imagination.  Thanks

SEA,
Thanks for the "sigh"   and for reading.

JLR,
Thank you very much  

IWithinYou,
Thanks for coming by and reading.  

Sven,
Thanks a lot.  Glad to see your post.  

Sue,
Thank you for the "Wow" and for reading.  

Melissa,
Yes, I did so to pull the poem together.  Thanks for noticing and thank you for reading.  

Elizabeth Anne,
It's good to see you here.  Need a fan?    Thank you, my friend.

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11 posted 2001-06-20 10:13 PM


Auguste,

     Yes I am slow at finding these poems.. I need more time to be here!  But boy am I glad I found this one! Such longing and need.. very sensual   Great poem

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12 posted 2001-06-20 11:33 PM


rosepetals,

Hey, don't we all need more time?    Thank you for finding this one and liking it.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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13 posted 2001-06-29 12:45 PM


Oooh this was something.....

Very nice

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14 posted 2001-06-29 12:48 PM


glad this one came back up   LOVE this.....perfect for my library  
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15 posted 2001-06-29 01:03 PM


Well written my friend.  Painted a sharp image indeed.
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16 posted 2001-06-29 03:13 PM


Quite lovely, and tenderly quiet...well done!
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17 posted 2001-06-29 03:16 PM


yes.. very well done.. sensitive, emotive, and enjoyable...


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18 posted 2001-06-29 04:21 PM


Sounds very tempting...how could you resist...James
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19 posted 2001-06-29 05:18 PM


oh my.....how I love this one....oh my..love the tempt within

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20 posted 2001-06-29 05:23 PM


Whew!! I think the air needs turning down...! *wink* I love it... Absolutely enrapturing...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

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21 posted 2001-06-29 09:22 PM


Such sensual writing, Michael...very beautifully done.
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