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Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

0 posted 2001-06-14 02:29 PM

Tears rolling down his soft cheek
Tears rolling down my wrinkled cheek
Please Grandma, can't I go home with you
Your daddy didn't say it is my turn for you

Warm arms around my neck
Wet cheek against wet cheek
Neither little boy nor grandma
Understand as we wait for our day

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-14 02:31 PM

Ouch!!!!

That one hurts....

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-06-14 02:46 PM

So few words...such a vivid, emotionally wrenching picture. Hope your day comes soon!

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

3 posted 2001-06-14 03:53 PM

Cpat Hair, severe pain......

JLR, me too....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-06-14 11:56 PM

this is wrenching M.E. .... hits much too close to my heart...
for I have heard a butterfly cry these same tears...
hugs to all involved...
jm

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-06-15 12:31 PM

awwwwwww...I can picture this...and have it framed in memory

~Wynter

* hope your turn is soon...huggssss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-15-2001).]

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

6 posted 2001-06-15 10:50 AM

JM, I know I'm not alone but I don't understand any more than he does. I guess Butterflies have to be tougher than this old brood mare.

nakdthoughts, yes, a pain we can't get to!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-16 05:02 PM

no words here, just too many tears in this one ME. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

8 posted 2001-06-16 05:07 PM

Sigh,now you have some tears rolling down my cheek..so very well done...gentle smile

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

9 posted 2001-06-16 09:28 PM

Sven, I'm trying to be brave!

Logan, thank you...and hugs

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