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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-06-16 09:37 AM


Fingerprints Left…

Feeling an emptiness
like a deep hollow well
Fingerprints left
upon my heart
sting with each beat
Pictures of you
in my mind’s eye
shadowed in the darkness
Words of love
no longer spoken
now screams
which haunt me
in my solitude…

Loneliness…

Missing you…

Longing for a touch
a whisper…
light to once again
shine where darkness has settled in…

words of love
to once again…

be spoken.

Annie Lehberg
achildsheart
06-15-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-06-16 09:57 AM


great description of loneliness and longing
Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2001-06-16 12:14 PM


AWhispersCaress~

'words of love
to once again…

be spoken.'


And they will ....
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-06-16 06:44 PM





fingerprints left..........

A really lovely and touching piece.......

{{{hugs}}} from me too  

Thank you
********************


It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-06-16 07:16 PM


Whisper's Caress, oh this one aches with regret.  You have captured the feelings very well.  Great write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
5 posted 2001-06-16 09:20 PM


Whisper--I know this feeling very much, Well expressed.

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