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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You…. Take the moment Sealing it safe Within the release Of your heart Oh, warm…. How many words Then For content When it is more than Happy Or pleased Far, far more than Satisfied Content comes In your smile Your eyes Touch An underlying But quiet Exhilaration Still waters Trembling in the depths Rippling currents Oh, warm Perhaps then, The most proper Other word For content Is You write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Perhaps the best words for this are... GENTLY GREAT!! |
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IWithinYou Junior Member
since 2001-06-14
Posts 21Within You |
Oh perfect.......perfect, perfect, perfect! I loved this write. "Who says dreams are dreams? Not I......not I I say again" [This message has been edited by IWithinYou (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Still waters Trembling in the depths" Beautiful and gentle in its touch... Well done. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a remarkable flow of words, Lady in White... Regards to you, Sudhir |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wow, I liked this alot, great write and Thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
what is contentment what are all your thoughts and dreams imagination Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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