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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-06-14 08:01 AM




Moccasins Trace

Within the cry of a wolf
Her voice will be heard
Gentle touch of her moccasins
Leaving a trace of slight prints
Which shows that she exists
Breeze of mystic reminisce

Inside her coat of natures bliss
Cascades moonlights kiss
The beautiful hue of her entrance
Is guiding wolves dance
Within symphony of elders flight
By watchers of the sky

And in her visions of the night
She spreads morning light
While dawn embrace her silky skin
Amiable love within
She is the spirit of the light
Gentle whisper of the night

And yet she hears the wolves cry
Supplications of wondering why
Her spirit whispers in the wind
Moccasins leave a vivid print
To touch your heart with concerns
For love that wolves earn.



Charisma
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09/02/01



[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-14-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-14 08:30 AM


Enjoyed the images you painted here..a great read!!


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2 posted 2001-06-14 08:32 AM


oh,this is just incredible and i love it so very much you write so very well  
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3 posted 2001-06-14 02:41 PM


Cpat Hair: thank you for your nice comment

Watersign6: thank you, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the read  

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(smiles) I love wolves so much, I always see them as mystical creatures filled with spirit and cunning wisdom, and just the sight of them howling to the moon always inspires me deeply with comfort! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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