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Vanished Light......Tanka
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Vanished Light......Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Vanished Light encircled sunlight vanished behind thunder clouds darkness rules the light reveal tears on rainy days by moments of moody sky Charisma ~*TMP*~ 13/06/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ You take the Tanka to majestic heights ! Stunning ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Beautiful!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"darkness rules the light" Another superb tanka...Love it. PM |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Well done, enjoyed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well done!!! Yes a moody sky...there was one came by yesterday, and then the wind blew it away and good Ol' Sun is here to stay, at least that is just what they say for at least the week or more |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love a moody sky mirrors my heart but makes me so happy makes my spirits soar!! yes, I'm strange  but I think this is beautiful Charisma!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: thank you for your always so lovely comments.... Cpat Hair: thank you for the beautiful Poeminister: my friend I'm flattered by your superb....thank you for that VAS: hope that the sun will stay as I adore her warmth and light. Sea: oh yes I know you prefer rainy days, as I still rembember your lovely rain senryus... thank you for the read my friend. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You always write the most magnificent tankas, sweet friend, your words echo those of Mother Nature, always weaving natural beauty be4fore our very eyes in an instant! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true storm of poetic passion! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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