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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-06-13 07:59 AM


     

Vanished Light

encircled sunlight
vanished behind thunder clouds
darkness rules the light
reveal tears on rainy days
by moments of moody sky


Charisma
~*TMP*~
13/06/01



[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-13-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-06-13 08:10 AM


Charisma~
You take the Tanka to majestic heights !
Stunning !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2001-06-13 08:19 AM


Beautiful!!
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3 posted 2001-06-13 12:18 PM


"darkness rules the light"

Another superb tanka...Love it.

PM

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4 posted 2001-06-13 12:25 PM


Charisma,
Well done, enjoyed.

VAS
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5 posted 2001-06-13 12:45 PM


Well done!!!


Yes a moody sky...there was one came by

yesterday, and then the wind blew it away

and good Ol' Sun is here to stay, at least that is just what they say

for at least the week or more

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6 posted 2001-06-13 12:58 PM


I love a moody sky
mirrors my heart
but makes me so happy
makes my spirits soar!!
yes, I'm strange  
but I think this is beautiful Charisma!  

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7 posted 2001-06-13 04:14 PM


Marge: thank you for your always so lovely comments....  

Cpat Hair: thank you for the beautiful  

Poeminister: my friend I'm flattered by your superb....thank you for that  

VAS: hope that the sun will stay
as I adore her warmth and light.

Sea: oh yes I know you prefer rainy days, as I still rembember your lovely rain senryus...
thank you for the read my friend.

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8 posted 2002-03-23 07:44 PM




(smiles) You always write the most magnificent tankas, sweet friend, your words echo those of Mother Nature, always weaving natural beauty be4fore our very eyes in an instant! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true storm of poetic passion! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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