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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-06-13 02:31 PM

*repost/revise from Open #7
Thanks to Poetic Knight for the line

He loves her more than life itself
He loves her more than any wealth
He loves her forever
With all of his gentle heart
As he always has, right from the start
Though they are alike in many ways
They are different enough to fill the days
She will always be the one that he loves
Her heart alone he holds
At night he dreams of her alone
Her love is more precious to him than gold

He loves her more than things of earth
His feelings are those of rebirth
He loves her forever
With honor, respect, and love
Like an angel sent from up above
Though there will be times he will not say
The right things on certain days
He knows her heart forgives
His heart alone she holds
For as long as they both shall live
His love is more precious to her than gold

He loves her as he loves himself
He loves her more than life itself
With burning desire and passion
And when his time is done
She will see the depth of his heart
And his love for her will just be beginning to start

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-13-2001).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2001-06-13 02:33 PM

Sven..........sigh.........and again sigh.....this is just lovely. Wonderful write dear friend. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2001-06-13 09:35 PM

awww when the hearts touch like that heavenly....

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

sans38
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 117
Westland, Michigan

3 posted 2001-06-13 09:45 PM

Magnificent! This was the perfect description of what true love is all about! Great work!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-06-13 10:24 PM

Such love here, what a beautiful thing.
Sandra

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-13 10:32 PM

Oh, this is truly beautiful! Everything you write, Sven, is from a beautiful heart.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-06-14 01:12 AM

your words just tell so much...i loved this piece...beautiful once again...thanks for sharing it sven

...until next time.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

7 posted 2001-06-15 11:26 PM

Ah, simply beautiful. I love this one, Sven.

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

8 posted 2001-06-16 12:19 PM

This is great. A love poem...I really like it. The words...everything.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-06-16 10:47 AM

thank you to everyone that's replied. . . I'm glad that I could share this one with you again, it's been a while. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

10 posted 2001-06-17 11:48 AM

Hi Sven,

Yes "signing" so ever wonderfully at this beauty, so very wonderful to read of your heart.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-06-17 05:48 PM

I like the thoughts Sven...James

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

12 posted 2001-06-17 08:26 PM

Another one to add to a growing list of favorites. Lovely, Sven...

Say it sweeter
than a kiss
softer than
heavenly bliss
write it 'cross
the sky above
you shall always
be my love...

*smiles*
~Tier

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

13 posted 2001-06-17 08:33 PM

Lovely Sven, I'm sorry a weak reponsive *sigh* from me also. If only more men in the world were of such a poetic nature!!
Isis

*<i>The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight</i>*

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