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Aorta....Tanka
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Aorta Boundless aorta misty whiff of restless stream silver waterline within the need of pouring effusion roots of life. Charisma ~*TMP*~ 08/06/01 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"within the need of pouring effusion roots of life. " I love those lines and the style of this poem....you're so good at this! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nice with so few words... enjoyable read! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ethome: thank you so much for your kind reply, glad you'd like it.  Cpat Hair: thank you and I'm glad that you enjoyed the read. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is different. . . that's why I like it. . . great job my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Oh this is beautiful! I love the way you do pictures with your poetry. Just stunning. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Ah..beautiful, its refreshing always to read your tanka. Well done. Poeminister |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! Would I like to stand in the spray of this lovely portrait and hear your verse in song along with woodland melodies! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oooh, now that's cleverly penned! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sven: My friend glad that you like the different.....I only translate my feelings when I face these pictures. Tovi: thank you for the stunning, glad you liked it. Poeminister: and it's always refreshing to read your comments, thank you for that my friend. Vas: thank you for your kind reply and for the wow.... Melissa: thank you my friend, glad you liked it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
misty whiff of restless stream silver waterline =================== stunning images Charisma... so wonderful to have your lovely poetry and kind spirit here again. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love the metaphor behind of this, sweet friend, it is as if the mighty stream is the heart of Mother Nature and gives way to the blood and magic of life and nature, leading in confluence to the ocean of life and love! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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