Open Poetry #14 |
A Word |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
"How quaint." I heard with disbelieving ears, Passe' said another, "Gone with the years." A word I had spoke, caused slighting looks, Did it now only exist in dusty books? Where are the principles of the three musketeers, Camelot, Roland, and others we held dear. Where are the flags so bravely unfurled, What has happened to this tired old world. Where a word was sealed with only a shake, no lawyers were called over a simple mistake. Code Duello was often used, to rectify principles that were abused. Principles? Or a way of life, Under the word, men died in strife. What is the word I dance around? HONOR A concept that holds its ground. To be honorable is to be true, A truth inside to fit me and you. Honor will not keep us from making a mistake, But they will be honest and not a fake. Has the world gone so far from this? If so, then our ideals are certainly remiss. A code by which only you can give, One quite apparent by how you live. [This message has been edited by Logan (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Time to bring this word back into vogue.... Thank you! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You'll be glad to know that at least in our little town, at one little elementary school, the words honor and integrity are again being bandied about...well, it's a start. Perhaps it is so in all of them in this town, but at this time, I can only vouch for one. AND BTW, almost as important as that, great job on this poem, it is tightly composed with fantastic flow and message! [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-12-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Cool observation and poem, Logan. I enjoyed this a lot! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Logan I couldn't agree more, honor is something to cherish. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wonderful poem about something I deem very important right up there with integrity. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I wonder too...thoughtful work, Logan - much enjoyed... K |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Honour...men have died for that word....women have suffered for thier honour...does it even exist anymore? Gang members wear their colours...kill for slights imagined...is that honour? You have penned this well my friend.... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Honor...rises.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superb work here Logan, indeed honor should mean as much now as it did then. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, honor should be one of the highest priorities in life...excellent reminder, Logan...thanks for sharing it with us... sp I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
you have penned a wonderful poem my friend |
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Mark Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 18 |
You write truth. I enjoyed this very much. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
First, I would like to thank all of you for your wonderful comments on a subject that is very dear to my heart and soul...gentle smile Thank you, Karilea, your comments are always so appreciated..gentle smile That is wonderful to hear, VAS, if prayer can be taken from the schools, maybe honor and integrity can be introduced..thank you for sharing...gentle smile JLR, thank you, and glad you enjoyed it...gentle smile Rosebud, yes, it is very much so..thank you for the read and your comments...gentle smile Ahhh, Sharon, gentle smile, thank you once again for your kindness and thoughtfulness...gentle smile Severn, I appreciate seeing you again with your thoughtful comments, thank you...gentle smile Paula, it is still there, more so than we probably realize, Keep the faith...gentle smile Decaflame, thank you for the read. Your words are, hopefully, prophetic in nature...gentle smile vandana, thank you for the read, and glad you enjoyed...gentle smile Ahh, Sven, my friend, gentle smile, your words humble me, and I appreciate them greatly Kris, thank you for the read, as I always apprciate your opinions...gentle smile Watersign, your comments are always looked for, thank you...gentle smile |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, your words here prove that honour still lives. Thanks, lovely piece, raising a real issue of the day. Sandra |
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