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Bound By Love...........a duet with Interloper
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Bound By Love...........a duet with Interloper |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It’s not even noon and my mind wanders to thoughts of her. She is such a fine woman, a great mother, friend and lover. I’m going to send her flowers and I think, since this is Friday, I'll take her to that Bed and Breakfast, out in the country, where we spent our second honeymoon. Thank you father God For the gift of this woman My soulmate for life So glad it’s Friday. I have everything done before the weekend….I hope he wants to spend some time with me. It’s been a long week and I’ve missed his company, his laughter, his loving. Dear Lord in Heaven He is the love of my life My precious husband Of course, the traffic is heavy on Friday night. I hope she liked the flowers. Of course she did. She always does. How much I appreciate her. I could never be a woman. She cares for our children, our home, me. I put in 12-14 hours a day, come home to relax and she does for me and the children into the night. Wonderful woman Greatest mother in the world How much I love you He sent me flowers. My favorite, no less. Daisies and Tulips…..white and purple. He hasn’t forgotten. His sweet way of saying, thank you. Does he know how much they mean to me? My thoughts are lost to him, and I smile, knowing he’ll be home soon. He is so thoughtful He never fails to tell me That he loves me still Now I know she liked the flowers. Look at the love sparkling in those beautiful eyes … the bright smile that tells me I’m the only guy in the world. How I love and adore her. I gotta be the luckiest fella in the world. I drown in her eyes Her smile is so exciting And she still loves me He is so handsome. His smile still makes my heart flutter. I remember our first dance like it was only moments ago. The waltz we fell in love to. It’s been too long since we last danced. He still moves me so With just one look in his eyes My love grows deeper I put my arm around her to kiss her hello and she turns into me turning this into a lingering hello. She has a gleam in her eye that tells me she’s got thoughts … impishly interesting thoughts. Good, so do I. Soft wonderful lips We never tire of kissing Each one a promise His warm kiss never fails to make my skin hum and my blood race. I hold a little tighter, letting him know where my thoughts are drifting to. Seems he’s already there, waiting for me. Passionate kisses Promises of tender love Unspoken notion We talk about the events of the day and I tell her my idea about the bed and breakfast. I can see her thinking, that same sparkle in her eyes. How do I tell her how much I adore her, how much she means to me, how much a part of my life she is … no, how she IS my life? Thou art my life dear Only reason for living Thee, spark of my soul How did I get so lucky? God surely smiled upon us, that night so long ago. It wasn’t fate that brought us together. No, it was angels. He is not simply just a part of me, I look at him and see myself. He wants to go to the B&B………I packed our bags this afternoon, hoping to surprise him. Two souls together Bound by love and made as one Ever, man and wife ~Interloper~ & ~SEA~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is an awesome write you two!! You are very lucky to have found each other. Excellent romantic work.  All writing comes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Two souls together Bound by love and made as one Ever, man and wife **** *sigh* how wonderful is your duet....last lines are so wonderfully, a compliment of the whole poem. Great teamwork my dear friends. truly a thread to my library. (hugs) Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you two..this is way cool...very clever.. like a diary entry with Senryu footnotes... very cool indeed...another well done poetic twostep by the dynamic duets duo  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lone Wolf~ thank you....he is a wonderful friend.....and such fun to write with Charisma~ I'm glad you like our poetry....thank you Janet~ thank you.....this was a joy to do, and Interloper is an amazing talent....I feel lucky to have had the opportunity to work with him ~SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thank you all for your kind and wonderful comments. If anyone has taken offense with my works, comments, or replies I offer my sincerest apologies. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA and InterLoper~ Just so lovely. What a pleasure to read something as beautiful as this. Both of you are such wonderful friends to have in this circle of poets. Thanks to each of you for your sincerity and your sweet blending of thoughts. *InterLoper~ No apologies necessary here, sweetie !  But I'll take a *Hug* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this was so pretty, and if all marriages could only be as you two have written I might just try it one more time - lol! A wonderful collaboration. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge and Mysteria~ two of my favorite ladies....( and I would suspect Interloper's too ) thank you this was a true joy to do.... ~SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bravo Bravo !!!! Great One(Two) Here! A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A beautiful presentation by two class acts....wonderful writing |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
you 2 are just amazing to me and this poem is just stunning and beautiful |
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