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Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

0 posted 2001-06-01 07:26 PM

"Watersign"

Give me a sign
Watersign
blood,water,fire
my desire
take me higher
never give up
hope empowers
truth inspires
Watersign
ambedextrious,aquarius
left handed,mysterious
talented,curious
spiritually guided
feminine mystic
regardless of gender
love is exceptionally unique
bring your smile
Watersign
bring your style
Watersign
dance an sing
crazy like you do
be part of the poetic revolution
take small steps to the truth
power is in love
love is in truth
Watersign finds peace
pride an truth
in music,lyrics
poetry an friends
Watersign takes action
with courage an
the power of the pen
in battle against the odds
Watersign will win

(c)2001 Kelli Kay

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

1 posted 2001-06-01 07:34 PM

WOW, that's a whole lot of you I guess.

Nice write, thanks

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-06-01 07:53 PM

Of course Watersign will win, it is inevitable, there is too much grace, too much inside not to do so,,very well said from a one that knows the deepness of your thoughts...gentle smile

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-06-01 08:45 PM

I could certainly picture the "water-bearer" when reading this poem. I was wondering if you meant "and" where "an" appears? I know this is very insignificant, but I was curious. Forgive please..

"I am not now that which I have been."

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-06-01 11:07 PM

thanks for the replies,for reading an commenting i deeply appreciate it

an Julian,yes i believe and does sound better
than an when reading it,thank you

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2001-06-09 11:52 PM

nice poem! im a firesign lol but i truly
do admire the watersign for all its beauty
and grace. you've captured that
exceptionally well here. take care.

amy

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-10 06:44 PM

great job with this one. . . but, being an earth sign myself, I have to have a bit of bias toward my own sign. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2001-06-10 06:48 PM

               "Watersign
                ambedextrious,aquarius
                left handed,mysterious
                talented,curious
                spiritually guided
                feminine mystic
                regardless of gender"

Well now that's quite the summation...especially that last line.
I have no reason to believe that you won't win especially within yourself.... I really enjoyed this very much!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Cheryl Flemming
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

8 posted 2001-06-10 07:02 PM

I really enjoyed this.Learned alot about you in this one poem.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

9 posted 2001-06-10 07:06 PM

Very cool poem...enjoyed!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

10 posted 2001-06-10 07:07 PM

Watersign,
Wonderful writing. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

11 posted 2001-06-10 07:56 PM

Aimster-thank you very much

Sven-really glad you enjoyed this one

ethome-happy to see you enjoy this one

Cheryl-thanks a bunch

JLR-appreciate your kindness

Poeminister-thanks for checking mine out

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

12 posted 2001-06-13 05:02 PM

enjoyed your watersigns... well done.

Charisma

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

13 posted 2001-06-14 02:51 AM

Swam further than a paddlle. This poem gave confidece . Thank you.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

14 posted 2001-06-14 08:21 AM

Charisma-so glad you enjoyed this one

theCraig-thanks for the kind words

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

15 posted 2001-06-14 09:38 AM

oh yes, I like this very much

I relate soooo well...

saving this one!

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