Open Poetry #14 |
Not being in Love...the Calm |
JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Not being in Loveā¦the Calm Now that I seem to have adjusted it feels surprisingly like an easy morning in spring before the sun becomes too intense the windows steady breeze is still enough to sleep lazily well into the day and not regret a minute lost Not being in love might prove to be the spring we never had and I might finally learn to appreciate the calm |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is beautifullllllllllllll |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Perhaps we should all take a time in our lives to appreciate that calm. This was a very good poem. Simply put, serenely felt. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is really quite the verse..... "Not being in love might prove to be the spring we never had and I might finally learn to appreciate the calm" Excellent! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Excellent work, and I like the last lines very much, as they said it all. Charisma |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Really, JLR, this is so good! I knew exactly what you meant here! Tremendous write, My Friend. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and when the calm is over??? good job with this one. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
*Smile* Very thought provoking. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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