Open Poetry #14 |
Forgiveness |
theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
Dusted with determination, her bent old body plows a furrow in the field of time. She has bled into the earth, and eaten unleavened bread with sacremental wine. Old Mother, seasoned with sorrow, proud of her pain and the daily acts of contrition that may bring absolution, or may crumble like the gauzy wings of moths. "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
wowza you can write and I am just in awe of you my wonderful poet friend,keep it up cuz I love it |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
excellent writing, ladypoet...she is indeed the salt of the earth....every one of them |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed and love this lovely piece. well done!! Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well penned ....that final run is perspective in it's deepest form! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sharp descriptions. Well done! |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
poemminister :* ((((((((pm))))))))) watersign6 :* (((((((((((((w6)))))))))) balladeer :* ((((((((((((b)))))))))))) chrisma :* (((((((((((((((c))))))))) ethome :* (((((((((((((e))))))))))) You guys are great! "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Roosevelt |
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