Open Poetry #14 |
Ship Of Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
As the sun begins to set Like a jewel in the crown We'll admire nature's beauty While the sun is sinking down The seabirds fly above us Gliding effortlessly in one place How we marvel at their beauty As they move with majestical grace Our ship of love sets sail Under the golden edged sky How tranquil is this setting As we begin to drift on by We'll snuggle up together As we sit here by the mast And out into the sunset Our dreams will soon be cast So much love there is to be made In this warming amber glow As this ship sails across still waters Where it takes us - heaven knows Suetang |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
lovely peacefull images float across my mind when i read this never is the world so beautiful as when there is some one to share it with |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh how beautiful penned and what a lovely flow.....glad that I've found it way back here. so up above Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem! Thanks! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is so pretty and romantic, Sue. Michael Proust- |
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