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Walk with Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Walk With Me Walk with me, pardons garden Before our hearts do harden. Take my hand in offered share Humbly, in friendships flare. Bats are hunting in the night Ever silent in their flight Swoop and feed within the dark Feeding on the minds embark. Sway with me from sorrows sad Cut away the cancers bad. Sew us up with lace of grace Let us heal the lesions place. Where once the sun bright in daze Now it shines in misty haze. Shadows wroth across the moon Stay the growth of love in bloom. Open the cage and free the dove Welcome the light, of sacred love. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sy....you have once again left me without words.... please, accept my simple thank you, for always writing at least once a day.... these are always keepers....{~,^} |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walk with me, pardons garden Before our hearts do harden. Take my hand in offered share Humbly, in friendships flare. =========================== Where once the sun bright in daze Now it shines in misty haze. Shadows wroth across the moon Stay the growth of love in bloom. Open the cage and free the dove Welcome the light, of sacred love. ============================== OHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!!  "pardons garden" HOW COOL IS THAT!!! I love the way your mind works *ww*  me   |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I came back to walk with ya again...  and cuz I forgot to put this in me library ... but any excuse to walk barefoot in your minds Eden is GROOVY!! *winkiewinkie*   [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautiful Seymour  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame, Thank you for thr read and comment. Sea, Thank you. JM, Love the way you comment. You are my Tinker Bell. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
seymour.....have readed this several times....as it is so beautyful. thank you for sharing. Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sy, Wonderful write, as always a pleasure to read. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem Seymour! "Open the cage and free the dove Welcome the light, of sacred love." I got the door jammed on that damn thing and I can't get it open I'm going to have to use a hacksaw! I'll let you know....thanks for the advice! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Beautiful comment thank you. Poeminister, Thank you for the wonderful. Ethome, Don't need a hacksaw, just use a little butter and squeeze through the bars. LOL |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is a walk that I wouldn't mind taking. . . great job Sy, just flowed like butter. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Lovely.......and eloquent..... really wonderful and full of meanings I wouldn't mind taking that walk too..... Thank you ****************** It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, I always like my bytter on toast. Thanks. Enchanted, Just grab a hand and your on your way. Sy |
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