Open Poetry #14 |
Lost In Dreams |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
In the early stages of slumber I lie awake and think of you You visit me in my dreams Always brightening up my view When I need to see your face I close my eyes and there you are How vivid is this image Like a bright and shining star My heart calls out your name In the stillness of the night Hoping my wishes will come true How I hope with all my might I cast out my dreams Into the star studded sky As I lie here and wait How much I'm hoping for a reply My love travels far On a moonbeam you now appear I try to reach out and touch you As your image is so clear I'm like a sailor adrift on the ocean On love's vessel I'm drifting to you Surrounded by love's calming waters Won't you join me on this boat made for two? How we'll ride the waves of love Before we are washed upon the sand As the suns first rays appear And I imagine you're here holding my hand Suetang |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Suetang, this is so beautiful! And the lovely pictures you have painted. Thank you for sharing. ME |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was wonderful! I Loved it!!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful word picture... and a very enjoyable read.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your kind words, I'm so glad you liked this one. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Simply beautiful! I really loved this! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
How very touching. It makes me long for those night-dreams. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sue, you are definitely a romantic, my friend. May I borrow your ship sometime? (((hugs))) Michael Proust- |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice.... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Beautiful |
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