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Glacier Heart
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Glacier Heart |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Frozen now supended incased in the icy words of silence which in glacial form do build with each passing season of doubt Ice aged remorsefulness of wasted summer days shared in naked hedonistic displays of love, compresses the layers of frigid denial into snowpacked fields... we can only ski atop and not melt without a new springtime to thaw these inclimate hearts... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
build with each passing season of doubt =========================== that says it all right there... where there is doubt, nothing can grow but more doubt. chilling poem of impact and imagery. clever employ of metaphor... well done poet sir. she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is so powerfully sad...a not of despair and everything that JM said, too!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a seemingly "iced age" of write....well done Sir! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such a strong freezing image indeed....... the impact is just chilling..... Well-done to say the least Thank you ********************** It's only me.......only me |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a great title Cpat! The verses come along to support the title beautifully....good poem! |
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