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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-05-21 10:20 PM


Our hands interlace together
Soft music all around us is heard
We move in so close together
Our mouths are not uttering a word

Our eyes are immersed in each others
As lips meet together and taste
Your hands they are noving down lower
As they begin to take hold of my waist

Hot breath on my skin ignites my passion
As you draw me in closer to you
The stillness of the night is so evident
There is nobody but us - just we two

My hand reaches up so tenderly
And with my fingers I begin to trace
Around your beautiful lips and across your cheekbones
How much I love to explore your face

A passionate kiss then follows
Soon our needs will have to be met
I could stay here with you like this forever
Until the sun in the sky no longer sets

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-21 11:05 PM


oh boy!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


RMW
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2 posted 2001-05-21 11:06 PM


Perfect!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-05-22 07:27 AM


SueTang~
How lovingly portrayed !
Enjoyed this muchly.
~*Marge*~

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-05-22 09:56 AM


Glad you stopped or it would have gotten VERY warm in here

Enjoyable read.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


brian madden
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5 posted 2001-05-28 07:13 PM


just have to open a window

sensual read

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Dark Angel
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6 posted 2001-05-28 07:19 PM


Sue, as you know, it is cold here in OZ, ahem anyway I just had to turn my heater off!
LOL
no longer needed it hehe  
enjoyed your poem very much
so tenderly written  

Maree

Suetang
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7 posted 2001-05-28 07:39 PM


I'm glad so many enjoyed this one as I enjoyed writing this one......Sue

Suetang

Honeybee
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8 posted 2001-07-03 10:06 PM



Oooh I really like this - so sensually perfect!~

Take care,
Melissa~

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