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Open Poetry #14

Haiku, three

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-02 02:18 PM

tree lined dirt beckons
byways less traveled, calling
spirits on high wind

sun peeks behind clouds
spirits in brilliant glory
secular stories

behind the bright, awe
past the heavens, awaits light
clouds peek and tell all

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-07-02 02:24 PM

You just can't trust those clouds...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-02 02:27 PM

Clouds cry tears of mirth
earth joined sea in singing soft
no breath so sacred

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-07-02 02:34 PM

This brought an image to mind of an old country road. I'm not sure why. Still, I liked this a lot. Pretty imagery.

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-07-02 04:37 PM

Beautifully done.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-07-02 07:20 PM

And this is what I saw in your beautiful haiku!
And my clouds were smiling! Lovely, just lovely.

If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-02 07:43 PM

a wonderful scene my friend. . .

it's definitely haiku day!!!

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Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2001-07-02 07:59 PM

Cumulus stories
Wafting about randomly
Ever changing tales

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

8 posted 2001-07-03 10:19 PM

Yes, a wonderful contest.

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