Open Poetry #14 |
Much Ado About Nothing |
Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Nothing I don't understand Nothing drives me up a tree Nothing turns out like I planned Nothing's got it in for me Nothing happenened yesterday Nothing fell out of the sky Nothing just won't go away Nothing made this grown man cry Nothing broke again it seems Nothing cost more than I had Nothing gives me scary dreams Nothing makes me feel so bad One thing I have learned is true when nothing seems to be amiss Something's prob'ly overdue and nothing good can come from this |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Applauds!!!!! My compliments, Dr.Moose. Much said for nothing. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1, I'll give you a bravo for nothing. Sy |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! When I read the title I wondered how you knew so much about my social life! Enjoyed this sir! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Tovi , Many thanks . Having been kicked so many times as soon as I let my guard down , I thought this was appropriate . Heads up , on your toes , eyes in the back of your head . Just because you're not paranoid doesn't mean " they're " not after you . Doc Sy , High praise , from one of your stature .Most gratefully accepted . Doc PDV, Social life ? Isn't that an oxymoron ? I don't know so much about yours , but mine could use a jump-start . My thanks for the R&R Doc |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Doc, This is great, and much truth to the last stanza, enjoyed much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ My thoughts EXACTLY ... 'Nuttin', Honey !' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well you could always come do nothing with me...sit on the riverbank...stare at the clouds passing overhead...dangle a line in the water...who cares if we catch a fish...when it gets too hot...SPLASH...what a way to do nothing.... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Entertaining, as always! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Cerenity , Thank you . Too much truth in the last quatrain I think sometimes . This was another fun one to write however . Doc Marge , Yup , I'd much rather have something small go wrong on a daily basis , than to get clobbered with a major catastrophe . Thanks . Doc Paula , Thanks for the offer sounds like fun , but I've got all these little problems to deal with . Doc Denise, Thank you , glad you enjoyed . Were those antlers I saw under that hat ? Doc |
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