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Cleansing
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Cleansing Today, I am cleansing my slate. Shades of gray washing over me as I scrub at thoughts that penetrate, exasperate, infiltrate my being. Searching, exploring, wondering what led me to this thickness, this coating, that resists the pressure I force upon it's removal. Heart-blocked, suffocating, stumbling to express. Meaningless now, marked for life, scars of loving leaving the myst of pleasure behind, and a wall of memories to climb over. Today, hidden messages, rise from invisable thoughts, layer by layer appearing upon my slate, questioning my every move, my state of mind. Tomorrow I shall try again, scrubbing a little harder, bleaching the stains that won't release me from your hold, until there are no more tomorrows of you entering my thoughts. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good, wonderful! I wrote one called "Cleansing" yesterday, you go girl! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
start at the beginning Wynter. . . and soon, you'll get there. . . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Good write enjoyed the read. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Keep this up! "Tomorrow I shall try again, scrubbing a little harder, bleaching the stains." I look forward to your talented poetic works of art! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wynter, you did this so well. Keep 'em coming  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wynter--Powerful write! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What is it, some days, when we pull out the brooms, and sweep like never before.... Excellent! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen...nothing good about it, just trying to empty some thoughts...thank you Sven ...I can start at the beginning or the end and I keep circling round... Sy, as always, thank you for reading. E, I am one who hates scrubbing..it leaves me raw and red... Interloper ..glad you enjoyed. Martie, thank you for reading and your kind words. Sunshine...oh I try but some days just never work out the way you expect. Thank you Karilea ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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