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Open Poetry #14

June Morning

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-06-08 07:51 AM

Spring morning breeze chills,
Playing slow songs on branches,
Breaking sun warms all.

Cloudy skies drift west,
Intertwines friendly dances
Off the morning stage.

Clear light blue canvas,
Rainless the only chances,
Winds spins now warmer.

Gloom

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-06-08 08:06 AM

Beautiful description of a June morning using this style! Well written, captivating!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-08 08:08 AM

enjoyed both the description and the style... look forward to more!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-06-08 08:21 PM

this is excellent in form and detail.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-06-08 11:15 PM

unusually soft for you..very nice, PG

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2001-06-09 07:18 AM

Thank you, ethome,
Seems the shorter forms suit me,
Linking them gives greater expression.

Thank you, Cpat Hair,
I am pleased you enjoyed.

Thank you, Irish Rose,
I am glad you liked it.

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Blame it on the form
and a warm late spring morning.

Gloom

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