Open Poetry #14 |
Thoughts Of You |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I think back over the past weeks. Fleeting moments, cast brilliant upon a background of warmth and depth. Each passing day, drawing me deeper into this web of possibility, of hope, that never once in all my days saw fit to grace my life. Till you. And I wonder how this can be? Just what miracle brought you to me. You had been there for so long. Before my eyes, within my touch, but never did I venture to dream that your eyes would look upon me with any favor. The epitome of insignificance. I am in awe. And I dare not hope that you wish to stay with me. To harbor such a thought, would only lead to a quiet desperation when you left. For I so want to keep you in my life. In my days, in my nights. In what I silently whisper to myself, in tones fraught with agony, anticipating a loss not yet felt. Forever? I am in love. You have made the intolerable, tolerable. You have taken the unimaginable, and given me dreams. You have touched my hand, and in that simplistic gesture, touched my heart. You have woven your spirit into the very essence of my own. And if the same power that brought you to me, would only see fit to let you stay, I should never ask, nor need, anything else in this, my life, ever again. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice...... enjoyed the read and the thoughts.. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Anticipating the loss of love...how will you truly appreciate it while it is yours? Well written, powerfully honest piece. Enjoyed! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
In what I silently whisper to myself, in tones fraught with agony, anticipating a loss not yet felt. Forever? I am in love. ahhhh but you just know, don't you? Wonderful thoughts and excellent writing Maree |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
You reach far to tug all heartstrings. This is beautiful in that it speaks so honestly. My sincerest compliments. I shall keep this for many reads. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
seraphin, Honest and emotional.. beautifully done TaraB |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you, all. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
perfection... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seraphin~ Just lovely is this ... 'And if the same power that brought you to me, would only see fit to let you stay, I should never ask, nor need, anything else in this, my life, ever again.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
wonderfully written |
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