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pres56
Junior Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 28

0 posted 2001-06-09 09:37 PM

The dark night
it was so very bright
I saw the eternal light
when the angel took my hand.

I saw up close and personal the stars and the sun
i felt the heart beats of everyone
And my sins were reduced to none
when the angel took my hand.

I was told there was no need to cry
that although i had died
A part of me would always remain alive
and i felt a warmth while the angel was at my side.

Now every new day seems so pure and clear
i am no longer full of emotions such as sadness and fear
All my problems and worries have all disappeared
as the angel takes my hand.

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

1 posted 2001-06-09 10:16 PM

That was lovely
Thank you
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-06-10 08:42 AM

Welcome to Passions!

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

3 posted 2001-06-10 08:52 AM

This is just beautiful. Welcome!

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-10 08:59 AM

Angels are aweseome, comforting creatures aren't they? Nice writing!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-06-10 09:58 AM

Pres~
Welcome to Passions.

We love angelic thoughts - this was nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

6 posted 2001-06-10 11:29 AM

Welcome and thank you for a look at your angel. A beautiful poem. Hugs, ME

pres56
Junior Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 28

7 posted 2001-06-10 01:14 PM

Might be kinda sappy for a guy but yes i do like angels, Thanks for all of your comments and i wont flood the forum.
(I am reading poems here though if i haven't replied to many).
pres

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

8 posted 2001-06-10 09:19 PM

oh I just love this one,very very good

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