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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-08 08:59 AM

Large dark clouds
Seem to support sky
Soft pillars

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-08 09:01 AM

Nice imagery in so few words... enjoyed!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-06-08 09:01 AM

~*~

in beauty
sky and sun abound
and clouds cry

~*~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-06-08 09:13 AM

Angel's wings
showered sacred rays
from within

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-08 10:10 AM

Cpat Hair ~ Thank you.

Sunshine ~
your beauty
bathes us all warmly
with your rays

Charisma ~
kind response
angel in Europe
flatters me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2001-06-08 10:15 AM

enjoy

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-06-08 10:35 AM

the painting and the verse are wonderful complements to each other.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-06-08 10:40 AM

vandana ~ Glad you did

VAS ~ As is your comment. Thank you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-06-08 10:40 AM

cloudy sky
makes my heart happy
quiet joy

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

9 posted 2001-06-08 01:38 PM

Bright aura spills
out of the shroudy body
that holds it up

Nicely done.

PM

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-06-08 01:59 PM

SEA ~
happy heart
writes a happy verse
like that one

PM ~
don't see clouds
not in Canada
only sun

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

11 posted 2001-06-08 10:18 PM

Behind the dark clouds
the sun is always shining
upon you my dear

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-08-2001).]

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

12 posted 2001-06-08 11:08 PM

Cotton dreams
Float across the sky
Magically

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