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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-05-29 04:03 PM

Fragrance of beauty
topped with thorns, protecting heart
of sensitive rose

Charisma
~*TMP*~
29/05/01

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-29-2001).]

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-29 04:07 PM

This is lovely....

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

2 posted 2001-05-29 04:18 PM

yes....this is beautiful

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-29 04:20 PM

so real I could almost reach out and smell it!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-05-29 04:23 PM

oh, there is so much more here than the words about a flower

well done!!!!!

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

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ireland

5 posted 2001-05-29 04:29 PM

Fragrance of beauty
topped with thorns, protecting heart
of sensitive rose

A rose by any other name...

beautifully penned poem.

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

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Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-05-29 05:05 PM

A Lovely rose you've penned. Very nicely done.

Poeminister

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2001-05-29 05:20 PM

Well done in so few words. Joyce

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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8 posted 2001-05-30 07:55 AM

Thank you all for reading and your wonderful replies, Its always nice to read them and know that you enjoyed this haiku.

((hugs))
Charisma

shawana
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since 2000-11-02

Posts 14

9 posted 2001-06-08 09:53 AM

Mom & I both thank you...;-)
'bagus'
Now on to finding that elusive flower
Soon...
~*p*~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

10 posted 2001-06-08 10:20 AM

very nice

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

11 posted 2001-06-08 10:26 AM

Hi Charisma, that's a real beauty you showed and wrote there. Thanks a lot.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-06-08 10:27 AM

I almost missed this ... glad I didn't.
Write on.

angelbear
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since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

13 posted 2001-06-08 11:16 AM

Wonderful job!

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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PA

14 posted 2001-06-08 09:10 PM

Chrisma,

Oh how wonderful! You penned this haiku perfectly

TaraB

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2001-06-08 09:22 PM

You have much talent for haiku my friend. This was wonderfully written. The picture is gorgeous. Thank you for sharing it.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

16 posted 2001-06-09 02:01 AM

Shawana: Thank you for the 'bagus'my dear, dear friend

Vandana: thank you my friend

Titia: Glad you liked it

Interloper: Glad you've found this lil' one, always nice to see you.

Angelbear: thank you

Rosepetals: thank you for the wonderful

Lone Wolf: I do hope that i've some talent, as I like doing these Japanese forms very much, thank you for your sweet comment my friend.

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