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Renewal.........Tanka
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Renewal Proud naked branches reached to claim heavenly touch struggle to survive seasons within recession renewal comes from within. Charisma ~*TMP~*~ 10/06/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Renewal is such an integral part of existence. So nicely said. I can't control |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a wonderful comment on all being naked, reaching to the heavens, to be renewed again... beautiful! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Renewal is crucial to survival. Very nicely done, my friend.  All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ You inspire through your work. How very lovely the verse and the photo. You are VERY good at these lovely pieces. Thank you so much for sharing them. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Renewal does come from within Charisma....I really believe that a person has to help themselves in the end! Good poem! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow, Charisma! That last line, POW!!ER!!FULL!! the whole piece, stunning! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Angelbear: you are right with that, thank you for your kind reply. Sunshine: yes my dear friend glad that the message is so clear. Lone Wolf: you're right as renewal is crucial for all life. Marge: I'm so glad that I inspire through my work....and I'm really happy that you like my humble work as I admire yours always. ethome: that's so through my friend. thank you for your kind reply. VAS: thank you for the *WOW* and the powerfull.... [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Yes we must find that renewal within our own selves sometimes...nicely done... Poeminister |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Awwww! So wise and lovely! Take care, Melissa~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i ditto and i am sooo glad to come across this gem... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Poeminister: I agree....thank you for reading and stopping by Melissa: thank you for your lovely comment faterider: thank you for your nice reply [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) YAY!!! May we all hold the hope for spring in all our hearts and watch as all of the trees flower with buds and leaves and revive our hearts with love and happiness! (kiss on cheek) Your words always shine with wonderrful wisdom, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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