Open Poetry #14 |
Pioneer Spirit ( sonnet ) |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Pioneer Spirit ( sonnet ) Obsessive in desire to forge a trail, To view a fresh horizon for himself, Then bear the hardships knowing he may fail, But not for fames indulgence or for wealth. He climbed the mountains just because they're there, Then spanned a dusty plain to find its end, To track a rivers course without a care, A fundamental right he would defend. For such as he no tilling of the soil, No frontier town could hold him in its heart, His solitary life of sweat and toil, I wonder if he knew he made his mark ? A heritage profound in times to come, The nations call e pluribus unum. [This message has been edited by OLIAS (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Olias, lovely sonnet. One spell..fundamental. your rhyme is perfect! Kathleen Blake |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Olias, what a gift from you! thank you! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Irish Rose, OOPs thanks for the pointing out the typo and thanks for your kind response, I'm glad you enjoyed. Lady in white, Your very kind I appreciate your response Thank you. Regards to you both, Olias. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a fabulous sonnet, Olias! I enjoyed this very much! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very very enjoyable OLIAS |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Denise, I'm new at these, and your encouragement is greatly appreciated Thank you. Watersign6, I'm so pleased you enjoyed kind poet. Regards, Olias. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dusting off...needs revisiting by those who adore reading sonnets.... I keep thinking that one day, I will create one.... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Ooooh Thanks Sunshine you keep me on my toes, I'm sorry I'm late with the reply my life has a puncture, you know you will attempt one of these, go on just one, pretty please, Regards Olias the pusher. |
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