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In Whispered Awe
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In Whispered Awe |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
He holds me tenderly sheltering my heart as though crystal cupped gently in his hands and in the night under the sparkles of scattered glitter he whispers of love in delicious shivers down my spine as he shows me heaven |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so few perfect words whispered ... so many perfect images and emotions. succinct and sensual ... and lovely Welcome to Poetry Land Tovi... so nice to have you here.  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A most lovely write, indeed! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Thank you, Janet Marie and Lady In White. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nice and tender, Tovi, well done...gentle smile |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'll bet you like the view |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"sheltering my heart as though crystal cupped gently in his hands" Beautiful writing! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i give ya 2  Very good indeed!! |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Sweet as nectar may all your life be thus "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful, tender....very loving...nice words... WELCOME TO PASSIONS Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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