Open Poetry #14 |
Oh Butterfly |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Oh Butterfly Oh butterfly how you do paint Into my mind until I’m faint You flutter o’er the daffodils And fill me with your wily skills Picture pictures beyond my think And then you sign them winkewink Your color fills my hungry core You feeds me from an endless store. Your wings are full of morning’s dew And play the sun like diamonds do. They hypnotize in endless grace Near or far where ever the space And when my dragon flew to you You hypnotized my dragon too. Sent him home a fireless hiss You tamed him with a magic kiss. If I brewed some raspberry tea, Would you or could you tea with me? I have a garden in my mind The menu is one of a kind. Winkiewinkie Stinky 06/05/01 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She sparkles brightly in the sun, yes, that little flutterbye of yours.... a delightful read! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What is flitting across your mind? More than a tea I'll wager Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Yes she is. *L* Interlpoer, LOL from lips to Gods ear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh sweet Stinky ... my prince of winkiewinkie You make me sigh on high ... the wind beneath my wings of butterfly You paint a smile on my lips ... I savor you in long slow sips We'll have tea for two ... we'll fly to the Eden in your mind when we're thru Tis there we will find Shangri-La and paradise ... lets go ... dont think twice Randy can fly us to the moon ... we can kiss the night and make it swoon In the morn we'll slide down golden sunbeam ... tell me do you dare to dream We'll paint a rainbow across the sky ... colors of cool from palette of Sy Dont forget the pot of gold ... Sy wisdom for all to behold And when the day is done ... we will fly Randy cross setting sun The tea is on ... raspberry brew .. how could I resist an invitation from you Randy says set the table for three ... he's coming along on our flight to infinity *winkiewinkie* ~~~~~~~~~ thank you my sweet poet kind I wish to order one of everything from the menu of your mind [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, We will do all those things and more For it is only the beginning of the store. I will give you my wishing wand to create And I will watch and see and relate. We will make a world anew A fantasy for two. That can only be reached on a dragons back That is hidden behind a midnight black. Where beyond will be a golden dream Full of ecstasys gleam. And we will be two butterflies To fly into enchantments sky. And we will have our raspberry tea And finally be free. To be continued: Winliewinlie. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You have answered my heart. Love Sy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I am enthralled at the perfect rhyme in this one, Seymour, I'm really impressed at how you did it so well. Kathleen Blake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Irish, My paintings were mostly impressionistic. Thank you dear. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is lovey....for a lovely butterfly |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
So sweet, very nice PM |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sigh, Sy......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, We butterflies thank you. Poeminister, Thank you for the nice. VAS, Thank you for the edited message. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
coffee with the Balladeer? Oh, no! Way too busy....tea with the dragon? Of course! Anytime!! where did I go wrong? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, About coffee I can't say. But your invited to tea. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And when my dragon flew to you You hypnotized my dragon too. Sent him home a fireless hiss You tamed him with a magic kiss. ============================== tis nothing less of Randys hiss... he just caught the sniffles from me kiss [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Well, I'd say you paint impressed-onistic ! And ya' write some purty good poetry too ! Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a perfect and flowing tribute to such a lovely lady Seymour ... much enjoyed both the originating poem, and all that ensued below, wonderful sentiments from you both! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Purdy romantic, Purdy poem, cute comments. Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Love and hugs back. You like raspberry tea? Kit, You know the tea bar is open. Kethy, Purdy comment, purdy thanks. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You painted some mighty big smiles here Sir Sy...awesome work from you..inspired by the fair Butterfly JM...but before you have tea alone with me sis...you should be warned...that TEA IS POWERFUL stuff |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy..I just loved this..made me smile big time! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
an yet another incredible poem here has made me happy bouncy tonight-> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Butterflies, Your right I'll be careful. Martie, Always happy to make you smile. Watersign6, Big time thanks. |
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