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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-06-06 08:45 AM


Oh Butterfly

Oh butterfly how you do paint
Into my mind until I’m faint
You flutter o’er the daffodils
And fill me with your wily skills

Picture pictures beyond my think
And then you sign them winkewink
Your color fills my hungry core
You feeds me from an endless store.

Your wings are full of morning’s dew
And play the sun like diamonds do.
They hypnotize in endless grace
Near or far where ever the space

And when my dragon flew to you
You hypnotized my dragon too.
Sent him home a fireless hiss
You tamed him with a magic kiss.

If I brewed some raspberry tea,
Would you or could you tea with me?
I have a garden in my mind
The menu is one of a kind.

Winkiewinkie Stinky 06/05/01


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-06 08:49 AM


She sparkles brightly in the sun, yes, that little flutterbye of yours....

a delightful read!

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2 posted 2001-06-06 09:49 AM


What is flitting across your mind?  More than a tea I'll wager

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-06-06 10:05 AM


Sunshine,
Yes she is. *L*

Interlpoer,
LOL from lips to Gods ear.

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4 posted 2001-06-06 10:09 AM


Oh sweet Stinky ... my prince of winkiewinkie
You make me sigh on high ... the wind beneath my wings of butterfly
You paint a smile on my lips ... I savor you in long slow sips
We'll have tea for two ... we'll fly to the Eden in your mind when we're thru
Tis there we will find Shangri-La and paradise ... lets go ... dont think twice
Randy can fly us to the moon ... we can kiss the night and make it swoon
In the morn we'll slide down golden sunbeam ...  tell me do you dare to dream
We'll paint a rainbow across the sky ... colors of cool from palette of Sy
Dont forget the pot of gold ... Sy wisdom for all to behold
And when the day is done ... we will fly Randy cross setting sun

The tea is on ... raspberry brew .. how could I resist an invitation from you
Randy says set the table for three ... he's coming along on our flight to infinity

*winkiewinkie*






~~~~~~~~~

thank you my sweet poet kind
I wish to order one of everything from the menu of your mind
     

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-07-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-06-06 10:38 AM


JM,
We will do all those things and more
For it is only the beginning of the store.
I will give you my wishing wand to create
And I will watch and see and relate.
We will make a world anew  
A fantasy for two.
That can only be reached on a dragons back
That is hidden behind a midnight black.
Where beyond will be a golden dream
Full of ecstasys gleam.
And we will be two butterflies
To fly into enchantments sky.
And we will have our raspberry tea
And finally be free.
To be continued: Winliewinlie.

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6 posted 2001-06-06 10:48 AM



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-06-06 10:52 AM


JM,
You have answered my heart. Love Sy

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8 posted 2001-06-06 11:21 AM


I am enthralled at the perfect rhyme in this one, Seymour, I'm really impressed at how you did it so well.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-06-06 11:26 AM


Irish,
My paintings were mostly impressionistic. Thank you dear.

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with you
10 posted 2001-06-06 12:04 PM


Seymour~ this is lovey....for a lovely butterfly  
Poeminister
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11 posted 2001-06-06 12:08 PM


So sweet, very nice  

PM

VAS
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12 posted 2001-06-06 12:25 PM


Sigh, Sy......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-06-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-06-06 12:48 PM


Sea,
We butterflies thank you.

Poeminister,
Thank you for the nice.

VAS,
Thank you for the edited message.

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14 posted 2001-06-06 01:00 PM


coffee with the Balladeer? Oh, no! Way too busy....tea with the dragon? Of course! Anytime!!


where did I go wrong?  

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2001-06-06 02:53 PM


Balladeer,
About coffee I can't say. But your invited to tea.

Janet Marie
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16 posted 2001-06-07 12:15 PM


And when my dragon flew to you
You hypnotized my dragon too.
Sent him home a fireless hiss
You tamed him with a magic kiss.
==============================

tis nothing less of Randys hiss...
he just caught the sniffles from me kiss  


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-07-2001).]

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17 posted 2001-06-07 01:08 AM


Seymour~
Well, I'd say you paint impressed-onistic !
And ya' write some purty good poetry too !

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Kit McCallum
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18 posted 2001-06-07 06:38 AM


Such a perfect and flowing tribute to such a lovely lady Seymour ... much enjoyed both the originating poem, and all that ensued below, wonderful sentiments from you both!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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19 posted 2001-06-07 08:42 AM


Purdy romantic, Purdy poem, cute comments.
Kethry.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2001-06-07 09:02 AM


Marge,
Love and hugs back. You like raspberry tea?

Kit,
You know the tea bar is open.

Kethy,
Purdy comment, purdy thanks.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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21 posted 2001-06-07 06:09 PM


You painted some mighty big smiles here Sir
Sy...awesome work from you..inspired by the
fair Butterfly JM...but before you have tea
alone with me sis...you should be
warned...that TEA IS POWERFUL stuff  



Martie
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22 posted 2001-06-07 06:24 PM


Sy..I just loved this..made me smile big time!
Watersign6
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23 posted 2001-06-07 08:37 PM


an yet another incredible poem here has made me happy bouncy tonight->  
Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2001-06-07 08:51 PM


Butterflies,
Your right I'll be careful.

Martie,
Always happy to make you smile.

Watersign6,
Big time thanks.

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