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Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

0 posted 2001-06-07 02:06 PM

She was like the willow
swaying grace in slender limbs
and he
dark passion and fire
highlighting her beauty
in a silvery sheen of
magic

So sweet together, like
a dancing sun and
a love struck storm
swirled up in a flirtatious delight
leaving me with a smile

So beautiful, I felt blessed
just to witness it
and as they walked by
wrapped completely in their own world
of discovering love
the light followed
warm and true
leaving just a touch
in my eyes
to treasure

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-06-07 02:11 PM

This is absolutely wonderful, Tovi! You are going to become a favorite read of many....

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

2 posted 2001-06-07 02:20 PM

Thanks so much, Lady in White. It means so much to me that you liked it.

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

3 posted 2001-06-07 02:37 PM

I agree with Lady's sentiment...I do already seek your out. Another wonderful symphony of words.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-06-07 03:25 PM

Ahhh, I have to agree with both of them as you will see yours back to back here, unless someone already anxiously snaps one up and puts it out of place...very nice words you flow with...gentle smile

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-06-07 03:29 PM

I will make it unanimous. Well done with a great finale.

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

6 posted 2001-06-07 03:43 PM

Azblond, Logan and Interloper, you are all far too kind but you've left me with a very happy smile. Am enjoying getting to know everyone. Thanks so much for such a kind welcome.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-06-07 05:36 PM

*W*E*L*C*O*M*E* To Passions, Tovi, this is such a beautiful poem!

Enjoyed reading and will definitely read more!

*smiles*

~Tier

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2001-06-07 05:57 PM

This is wonderful! You've captured the glow with such originality...much enjoyed..and I don't think I've said, welcome to Passions!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

9 posted 2001-06-07 08:59 PM

Welcome to Passions and i am going to read all of yours cuz this is just superb

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