Open Poetry #14 |
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Love is the Air |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
Marsha love this one's for you. See the things you make me do? The challenge met now try and see if you can steal these words from me. Whoops! I didn't steal them from you, I didn't! Well maybe some of them It's snowing in Mildura the moon is turning blue the unthinkable has happened as all my thoughts return to you I'm sitting in my office a half smile on my lips memories of your kisses and searching fingertips my mind lost in a reverie as I gleefully recall the taste of you within my mouth and how you gave your all I reminisce about you there filling all my being I can smell you on my skin and oh the things I'm seeing eyes that leave me gasping thighs as firm as coal with diamond hard desire I give to you my soul I didn't want to love you just wanted to be friends but it's snowing in Mildura so I can make amends I cannot forget the wonder unlikely as it seems you have become knight errant a messenger of dreams Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! So nice to see you... and your writing is superb too... Regards O Kethry, Sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
O Sudhir, How lovely to hear your 'voice' across the miles. As always you have managed to be first in my books. ![]() Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kenthry, I like this Kenthry! It flows beautifully! I'm always jealous of people can rythm so well... I just can seem to do it..hehe ![]() TaraB |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rosepetals25, thank you for your response,how lucky you are to be able to NOT rhyme. My free verse and blank verse are both atrocious because I can't not rhyme. I have a friend who says he could make a poet of me if I was less disciplined. lol. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kethry, I love the flow of this. . . it's totally amazing. . .and the emotion and feeling of it is just wonderful. . . you communicate it very well. . . ![]() ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Missy, I believe this is one of your best! Dennis |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this is Excellent!! ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
your words flowing soft and so lovely. excellent write as always my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Kethry the words flow through the lines so beautifully in this piece. Excellent traditional poetry and a real pleasure to read. I'm sure Marsha is more than pleased!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
for Marsha! How lovely! Kethry, hope you are well! Kathleen Blake |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, flattery will get you everywhere ![]() Dennis, thanks for the missy bit and thanks for the praise. Watersign6, What only one thumb up ![]() Charisma, your softness is spreading across the miles to me, thank you. ethome, I didn't exactly write this for Marsha, It's more I stole the words and re-arranged them to suit myself ![]() Irish Rose, Marsha and I are practicing 'duelling banjoes' using the same phrases and putting them together in our own style. Its a game, thank you for your kind comments. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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