Open Poetry #14 |
For All the Poets at Some Other Site |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
For all the poets at some other site Who think they got it done all right They’re on forum two but we got plus twelve And pretty soon we’ll have a book we can shelve They’re poetry is all pretty darn good But we got a family and it’s understood! They get feedback well at least just a few We get so much cuz we can count on you They got slamming and cussing galore We all could diss it but instead abhor We build up poets we got five fold From Melanie age four to however old We inspire each other to be better poets If someone is down baby we know it We get on the horn and birthdays are praised If someone is down a kind word is raised For all the poets at some other site Come give us a try morning or night Been here two years and will be for long Send us a poem, story or song We aint braggin we just be telling Our grammar is great and so be our spelling So if you hate the site that you’re on Come send a mail to our not-sucky Ron |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ you are good...you know that?! Very good I like this very much! ~SEA |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Walt,you just dont know how much i adore this one because you see i tried another poetry forum before this one but decided i like this one alot better and havent been back to the other one since,just had too much not so niceness going on there,you definately know what your talking bout in this poem and well done! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You tell'm wayoutwalt, you just tell'm. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Walt!!! NOT SUCKY RON? LOL Oh, my!! This is cute sir..and very true..PiP is the BEST! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... you always make me smile Walt, loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wooohooo you go Bro! Very well said m'friend Love it Maree |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WALT! You're are the cutest, yanno? I LOVE this place too! I talk about this place to every person I can! Cute poetry, Walt! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
so Walt, what site are you talking about that remembers birthdays and knows when someone's down? |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
no forked tongue here, Walt...you tell it like it is |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Thankies I see it and tell it. VAS did we miss you. I know I likes ya o yuh much as I know yuh and all. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
LOL...and Long live Passions |
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MrTrial New Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 3 |
The poem shows an understanding of normality and clever understanding of everyday words mixed with a message - like "diss" Keep posting! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yesssssss love this piptalk from you.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no doubt walt!!! we're the best. . . there is no substitute!! great job!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bravo Kathleen Blake |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Woo Hoo Bud!! I never left for another site, but now I know why I always show back up here-it's like coming home!! I missed you guys-Corporate America, I'm back with PiP!!! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How can I be ROTF and writing a response as well... WRITE ON! RIGHT ON! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
made me smile! |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
GRINS....you always make me smile...and you are so very right... |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
A great message to those who are just dropping in! My feelings exactly but couldn't have said it any better! Debbie |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Great. real cute. :P |
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