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In Regrets
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In Regrets |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
In Regrets Tell me my sweetheart if my feelings are true. Are the feelings that dwell inside my heart the same feelings that live within you? You don't seem to care for me as much as I would like you to. Could any one woman possibly be as sweet as I suppose? Do my feelings matter or does my heart impose? With your beauty you enticed me and now I yearn for the softness you possess. Yet if I am not permitted to share my life with you in regrets I shall miss your tenderness. Jameslee@May21,2001 |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Hi James! I see the sadness is still in your sweet poems. i am hoping to see that change one day soon. Take care , my friend! Aloha Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. Write on! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tenderly written and sweetly sung Liz |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
E'en tho the sadness reigns, never do you once express remorse but only that one should see that you shall stay your course... well done Sir....well done.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sweet darlin James...if she cant see the man in you its her loss...you write so tenderly of all you dream of...keep dreaming |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a tender, moving piece. Kathleen Blake |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a tender and well written piece I am sure that with the devotion you have shown in this poem all regrets will soon vanish. "across the unfair divide |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so sweetly sad...melancholy yet not self-pitying..I really like it..  K |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you always know how to touch my heart.....love it James. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful poem. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
what a beautiful poem this is,i will be reading more of yours  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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