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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-05 05:33 PM

Love has caught me up
like Ganymedes of old
I am heaven bound
transported by your kisses
enslaved by your silky touch

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-05-2001).]

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

1 posted 2001-06-05 05:36 PM

This is a nice one, I like it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-06-05 05:37 PM

Lovely write, Interloper. I enjoyed it much.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-06-05 05:41 PM

~*~

beg me not with talk
though I would still hear your voice
but be heaven bound
now gone without my kisses
though I but waved you away

~*~

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 06-05-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-06-05 05:50 PM

nicely done.... captures in a few words the essence of the feel.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-06-05 05:53 PM

Titia ~ Thank you

*blush*

Lone Wold ~ Thanx for the read

Lady ~

I shall never beg
though banished with but a wave
you miss my kisses
you will miss my voice the more
and my eyes which beheld you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-05-2001).]

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-05 05:58 PM

Clever comparison. Nicely done

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-06-05 06:29 PM

Love, take me with you
tonight we are heaven bound
release me never

~SEA~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-06-05 06:33 PM

SEA ~

were I Perseus
and you my Andromeda
I would loose your ties
And proclaim to all the world
I am eternally yours

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

9 posted 2001-06-05 06:54 PM

You weaved a beautiful poem, many to appreciate, your poetry is music to many here at PIP. A master piece of art.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-06-05 06:57 PM

LP ~ Thank you sweet lady. I hope the concert continues

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

11 posted 2001-06-06 01:53 PM

Awesome. A whole page of kewl poetry. Applauding you all.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

12 posted 2001-06-06 01:58 PM

Excuse me, but did it get a bit warm in here? Whew.....

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2001-06-06 02:00 PM

what lovely pictures and the poem, I enjoyed this complete thread, I love threads like these!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2001-06-06 02:02 PM

Interloper...such romance dose make need for a fan. Lovely!

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

15 posted 2001-06-06 02:06 PM

Bravo! I love how it starts so simple and through others continues to grow......

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

16 posted 2001-06-06 02:22 PM

*sigh*.......wonderful thread of love.

((hugs))
Charisma

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

17 posted 2001-06-06 02:56 PM

Here....now...forever
my heart beats only for you
take me if you will

~SEA~

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

18 posted 2001-06-06 03:18 PM

I am heaven bound
to you today
You are the sacred ground
where forever I'd stay
Yes.......
I am bound to you
night and day
That much I can say

******************

Lovely......The whole thread and replies is
a wonderful magical read.........

Thank you sooooooo much.
**************************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

19 posted 2001-06-06 03:41 PM

BrightStar ~ Thank you.

Decaflame ~ I believe the fire has been stoked

Colleen ~ And I love it the more for your presence here

Martie ~ I fear to fan here would be to cause the flames to rise.

azblond ~ Finally, one who openly and correctly states that my work is simple

Charisma ~ Love those {hugs} Thanks for joining our little party

SEA ~
our matching heartbeats
duet for eternity
offered gift taken

MyEnchanted_Melody ~
I could ask no more
we sanctified together
on this hallowed ground

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

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