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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-05-31 12:56 PM

Fate

Fate tries to put all in one straight
but Humans obscure deviate
beyond the edge of his Force,
in a Thought plagued course
that boils Nature- makes her steam,
and spill over ready to scream
though finding himself by these purblind,
he still will come through the wind
galloping, following falling Chance,
upon a steed, and bearing lance
he rides beseen in dark shadows
toward all today's tommorows-
the future's future from past kind
coming full apace from behind,
eventually to give back from what is gave
and with nothing does nothing save
in furious force charging too fast
his weapon pressed will be to-brast
but charge tamed, modestly paced
will grace faster find than haste
then he'll 'light, and weild a holy glaive
and smite for right in hunger brave
and make meeds merited
for good deeds deliver'd
Fate is naturally knight and nurse
that we in habit bless or curse

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theLadypoet
Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 97
Or USA

1 posted 2001-05-31 01:00 PM

Lovely Camelot feel.

theLadypoet

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-31 01:05 PM

the flow and feel of this is wonderful! I enjoyed this very much and am saving it in my library!

~SEA

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-31 01:54 PM

ah, fate,. yes, enjoyed this very much

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:26 PM

theladypoet--thank you for stopping by and commenting.

SEA--Thank you. Glad enjoyed the read.

Irish Rose--Thanks for reading and enjoying.

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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-05-31 03:34 PM

quote:
he still will come through the wind
galloping, following falling Chance,
upon a steed, and bearing lance
he rides beseen in dark shadows
toward all today's tomorrows

indeed, to come through the wind...
toward the quest...

well done!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

6 posted 2001-06-01 12:56 PM

Melodic and fanciful. Enjoyed greatly.

"I am not now that which I have been."

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

7 posted 2001-06-01 12:56 PM

Whenever I forget the definiton of fate, I know where to go, right here. Excellent! Thankyou for the read.

Tammy

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-01 01:00 PM

well done. . . well done. . .

I love the feel and the flow of this. . . like a tale of olde. . . excellent. . .

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2001-06-01 01:04 PM

"
                but charge tamed, modestly paced
                will grace faster find than haste
                then he'll 'light, and weild a holy glaive
                and smite for right in hunger brave
                and make meeds merited
                for good deeds deliver'd
                Fate is naturally knight and nurse
                that we in habit bless or curse"

So true and so well written!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-06-01 01:17 PM

Fickle fate. Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

11 posted 2001-06-01 01:21 PM

'Fate is naturally knight and nurse
that we in habit bless or curse'

You are so right there, so well written

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

12 posted 2001-06-02 09:11 AM

Hi Poeminister,

What a thought provoking read, and with vived imargery as well, this must be put in my works of art folder thank you the prize piece,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

13 posted 2001-06-06 07:24 AM

WOW! do you know how to write with that pen of yours or what,this is great!

Mote
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 31

14 posted 2001-06-06 03:45 PM

Ooops. Loved this

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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

15 posted 2001-06-06 03:59 PM

Decaflame--Thank you so much for stopping by to read and for your kind comments.

Julian Lester--Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

JCGF

Thank you

Sven--I'm happy to know you liked this...thank you

ethome--Thank you always for your kind words.

Interloper--Glad you could stop by and that you enjoyed the read.

Titia--Thank you

Cerenity -Glad to know you enjoyed. Thank you for your comments.

Watersign6-Thank you for your compliments.

Mote--Thank you

Thank you all again for responding.

take care,
Poeminister

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