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Goodbye Angel
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Goodbye Angel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Hello angel of my tears ephemeral my sylph endeared little blonde angelic eyes it took a month for me to cry and all the things they asked me do the trigger found I found in YOU and all the things they said I'd see was all the things I hate in me. I understand now so much more. I'm sorry that I am so late. I could wish forever more and pray to mark another date Alway I remember then your eyes in wonder...wonderment... how we chose the herbs you drank a child in wander--your garden. By the pool, we drank a toast. All the herbs were then in bloom. And the horses smelled the boast-- they stretched their necks despite of gloom. We laughed at them... herbs out of reach. Clever us, to cause the breach of a hunger left unknown the yearning ever to go home and now your questions are my own. Goodbye, angel of our tears... ephemeral-- a sylph endeared... all that you ever wanted be-- I'll pray for strength of you in me. love to you...in your weakness? You are my strength. I'll not forget. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
A wonderful tribute to your friend, Serenity. You may not feel this appropriate from me, but I am an old man and seen and felt much, and I tell you true, when all is said and done, only the memories are what we have, keep the good ones in your heart. Thoughts go for you...gentle smile |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
This is a heartbreaking poem. So sad...a angel spread your wings and embrace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW I am silenced by this work, my friend... Regards O Serene One, Sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
it took a month for me to cry and all the things they asked me do the trigger found I found in YOU and all the things they said I'd see was all the things I hate in me. I understand now so much more. I'm sorry that I am so late. I could wish forever more and pray to mark another date Alway I remember then your eyes in wonder...wonderment... how we chose the herbs you drank a child in wander--your garden. =================================== all that you ever wanted be-- I'll pray for strength of you in me. love to you...in your weakness? You are my strength. I'll not forget. ================== Sen...that is the greatest tribute and show of love you can give her... find your strength in her ... and then find yourself ... she would want that for you.... Its gonna be Ok baby.... love you KA...just because youre YOU ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sometimes Candlebox I wipe the night from my eyes Block out the sunny day and I hide Everything's falling down around us I'm just missing the rain I'm happier now today Don't let me down Don't let me go A change of seasons inside her mind In time I'll decide In time I'll decide to move on We change directions, we watch the tides And we borrow too much We form restrictions and we form lines And we separate you from me Sometimes, sometimes we carry more weight than we own Oh but sometimes sometimes goes on Night takes the light by the hand Tunes out the boring day and cries out loud Everyone's hanging on, hanging on my words It kills the thrill in being divine But she's happier now today Don't let her down Don't let her go There are no reasons there are no lies We just bleed together That's how we realize We change directions we watch the tides And we borrow too much We From restrictions and we form lines We separate you from me Sometimes sometimes we carry more weight than we own Oh but sometimes sometimes goes on Somehow we'll find a way we've got to paste it back together These ripped out pages of old coloring books where your Gold is silver, my blue is gray Its all held together by cellophane tape but We change directions, we watch the tides And we borrow too much We form restrictions and we form lines We separate you from me Sometimes sometimes we carry more weight than we own Oh but sometimes sometimes goes on In my head I've got everything I want in you |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Goodbye, angel of our tears... ephemeral-- a sylph endeared... all that you ever wanted be-- I'll pray for strength of you in me. love to you...in your weakness? You are my strength. I'll not forget. so powerful and full of emotion. THere are times when we must say good bye to loved ones but remember they will remain in our hearts whereever they may have gone. Take care, huge hug. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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