And With His Touch ( using challenge phrase)

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Open Poetry #13

And With His Touch ( using challenge phrase)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-07 11:30 AM

And With His Touch

And with his touch,
he wraps me into night's fold,
paints me softly on a canvas of dreams,
where thoughts meet across boundaries
surrendering to the moments...of his touch.

Delicate as a whisper, kisses I place
to carve my image into his mind,
as he strokes me with his words and
I journey into his tomorrow.

As the air is scented vanilla
and the dark beckons, he reveals to me
that part of him that veils my heart, caressing,
drifting, I am in timeless hold. And as indigo fills the night

Surrendering to his voiced loving, embraced
by the feel of his body, the soft sweetness
in sharing that which is mine, unfolds,
and from one touch, the colours of the night
are woven into two hearts and minds, wants and needs.

Bathed forever in his charms, each night,
I feel the tracings of his love,
from fingertip touches to lips that press,
to bodies that mold...I accept it all,
the lingering imprints of him,
every moment turning, leaving me breathless,
as I await in the flickering shadows,
to surrender in the dark to the reality of his loving
from just one touch...

~Wynter/Maureen

*reworked from "One Touch Surrendering"

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-07-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-04-07 11:33 AM

Wynter~
Very nicely done ...

'the lingering imprints of him'

Yeah !
~*Marge*~

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-07 12:01 PM

wow oh wow, I really got into this one, Maureen!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-08 03:12 PM

just beautiful Maureen. . .

I really love it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-04-09 09:50 AM

Marge, Kathleen, Sven thank you for reading, and always giving me support on here...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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