Open Poetry #13 |
The Cockleburr (or As the Coyote Turns) |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I dreamt I was a cockleburr, ...stuck in a coyote's coat, He stopped to scratch and I fell off, ...and that is all she wrote. But who is she? I asked myself, ...to pen of cockleburr, As I lay upon the ground, ...no more in coyote's fur. A cockleburr upon bare ground, ...no fur in which to stick, While I wondered who she was, ...she didn't give a lick. The coyote's gone, and so is she, ...and here alone I lie, Since cockleburrs don't read or write, ...I say farewell, goodbye. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this ! Thanks for sharing this with us! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Mike cool and Silversteiny o yuh! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awesome work Mike...once again the visions that you draw within in a weave are amazing~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where DOES your mind go, Mike?....I enjoyed, of course! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderfully enjoyable read, Mike! I'm so glad you're not a cockleburr and I hope you won't feel like one long for you must, you must keep reading and writing! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a wonderful fun poem. Who else would think of writing about a cockleburr. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ *smiling* here ! 'A cockleburr upon bare ground, ...no fur in which to stick, While I wondered who she was, ...she didn't give a lick.' Only you, Coyote ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--Thanks for the smile! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
(smiling too) I like your tongue in cheek fun. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
No roadrunners around these here parts??... We've gotta keep our resident coyote happy... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Good stuff. Melton |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
loved it |
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