Open Poetry #13 |
Waiting For Romance......( acrostic) |
SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
When the night sighs And whispers call Intimate lace, off shoulder falls Tempting you to Investigate with touch Negotiating curves with the Gentlest of fingertips Fragrance…..ever so subtle Obliterates all thought Recklessly toying with your senses Requiring focus On skin……… Moans of pleasure Amplify with kisses Needing more……yet Careful not to rush….. Ecstasy will come soon enough…… ~SEA~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
May the gentlest touch come to you soon. Very beautiful piece SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Oh yes. You really know what you're doing here... and you know how to write too *S*...I'm definitely being inspired now. As to what, I won't say. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mmmmmmm very nice Sea--- and yeppers...its Friday again ... me thinks its gonna be a nicey spicy weekend LOL ... and just like I said last week... me thinks Sea is gonna disappear for the weekend too very expressive and sensual...sexy stuff |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Brad~ thank you PK~ oh please.....tell Janet~ ahhh yes, and of course, I'm listening to Prince it's a stormy night..... ~SEA |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Have you been hanging out with Sharon?-- Your poetry is getting very erotic lately...lol ( not that I mind ) well done SEA. |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
SEA. It doesn't sound like you're 'waiting' for romance on this one. Nice acrostic. Panne |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nicely done, SEA.... I think your weekend will be a GREAT one! *G* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
very nice piece Sea....loved reading it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh beautiful SEA Nothing compares to thy beauty Would that I could fly the faster Never wasting one tick of time Going by So quickly Onward I press Forward to our union Anticipating Drawn by thy turn Of phrase Verily I am Ever thine Robust passion Overwhelms My senses And speeds my Natural instincts Clearly an inferno of desire Envelops me Come hither as Only I can Make thee tremble Eternally with my Seduction Take my body Only to please Yes, thee who awaits Oh vessel of passion Unfulfilled Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Jamie~ Is Sharon naughty too? Erotic.....now there's a word I like Panne~ just waiting till this evening thanks Suthern~ thank you, I hope it is Charisma~ thank you!! Interloper~ you made me sigh,and gave me such a wicked smile.....you are so awesome! Thank you for that fantastic acrostic...... ~SEA |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Smles...sighs... this was a well penned acrostic and yes, wonderfully erotic Yo go gurl! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Destiny Nicole Junior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 19USA |
Sea, I loved it, You are defintely into someone or should I say something, Best of wishes girl. Keep em coming and please do tell all whats up |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Awesome acrostic, beautifully and sensually expressed, bravo! Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice..I love acrostics *s ~Wynter |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . um SEA, you know. . . we've got lots of tables over in Adult. . . perhaps I'll hold one for you??? ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderfully seductive, SEA. Much enjoyed! All writing comes |
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Writer Junior Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 21CA/USA |
I hope you get your lace and whispers Sea. Very nicely done! Two thumbs up |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
OMG SEA, you are such a tease. I hate you. this was just to sensual. I really hate married women, like you teasing us single guys. I need a cold shower. Parker |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This read so smoothly, I wouldn't have noticed it was an acrostic. WEll done Liz |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Koko~ thank you very much....I had fun with this DN~ thank you..... Melissa~ thank you! Wynter~ I do too...thank you Sven~ I told you....I'm too shy for that...... LW~ thank you sweetie Writer~ Welcome and thank you....and yes, I did Parker~ hey handsome.....you hate me? That hurt....that really hurt...... and here I put that lace on just for you Elizabeth~ thank you so much ~SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
So, I really don't have to wait anymore? But the again neither do you...... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world 'g. Bernie Slicker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This flowed so beautifully ... a perfect acrostic ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
See how much of a tease you are... you need to be spanked. Parker |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bernie~ Marge~ thank you!! Parker~ Bring it on baby ~SEA |
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