Open Poetry #13 |
Yosemite Cabin Fever |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yosemite Cabin Fever In cabined fever’s swift defines A couple’s passion rightly climbs Before spring’s thaw sheds the rime A melting sweet, this sublime Oh tender love, ‘twas the night In silk-spun beginnings of twilight The tender kiss offered aloft Your lips came to caress the soft From there the twilight grew thus dark But your cabined fever flew to spark Love’s true light, which grew to heights That kept us warm throughout the nights Ah, the hills and mountains held our souls While the valleys below thus held our gold write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
So beautifully done! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I lived close to Yosemite for a few years.....it's amazing there....and this is beautiful! SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very well done. Almost a sonnet Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful!!! *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this was so soft, and did it flow! ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Need I say (as one who holds Yosemite close to his heart) I truly loved this? - Let us explore all of our country's great parks - What a travalogue we can create ~G~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Now that is fever with a fervor! Nicely penned, lady... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Brad, your response is feverish, thank you... SEA, it is...it is...., and thank you... Interloper, yes...sigh...almost, but not....I must ponder a little longer....posting is so much fun!.... Suthern, thank you! Yes, Mysteria, Yosemite flows, most assuredly.... Mr. Yeats, and who shall take the photos?... Balladeer....yes, indeed! Thank you! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I have many scenic photos ~S~ - The others will take a better photographer ~G~ |
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