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The cliffs of fantasy
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The cliffs of fantasy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
There is this place I sometimes go When all around me Seems unknown I turn towards The midnight sky And instantly I soar beyond Passing clouds And shooting stars Atop a ridge I rest awhile Hearing echoes In the distance Trembling sighs Are gently whispered Then suddenly I am reeled Into a dream Of endless feelings Looking back At yesterdays When love I thought Would always stay Then casually I shed a tear Until that moment I felt no fear With blink of eye I turned around Soared back towards These earthly grounds Returning home To face another day Yet upon that ledge Where I once laid In blanket of snow My heart remains... *coco*  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
No, your heart is here for us all to see. And what a GOOD heart it is, too. Please give us more. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
A beautiful Piece you have penned here!  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Interloper, you're such a treasure and I thank you so very much PoetFriend... Brad, thank you for your kind reply I'm happy to read that you enjoyed it... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your words are beautiful enough to stand alone, Coco...but I love the beauty of your presentation! Just stunning! and? glad you are back! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
both are stunning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco. . .this is absolutely beautiful. . . it's so nice to have you back. . . you've been missed. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ This is so pretty. I enjoyed the way in which your words led me to the image formed in my mind~ Nice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coco I like your fantasy...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - lovely images! One of your best! Into my library this goes Take care, Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hey you!!! welcome back sweet poet... I love the flow and presentation of this... the imagery is lovely and thats a very cool title wonderful write Coco... so nice to see your name here again It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Leave your heart . . . out in the cold? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Gosh darlin I have missed you...welcome back...and this is just stunning |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, your comments are greatly appreciated sweetie I am at loss for words sometimes when it comes to a reply and I just want you to know dearPoetFriend that your friendship warms my heart and your poetry touches my soul ...IrishRose, thank you hun for taking a peak at my poem and my hugs2u for your kind remarks... Sven, I've missed this place so very much and I'm sooooo glad to see you liked this piece and thank you sweetie for always being there for all us PoetFriends... Marge, muaaah on cheeks to you, my dear PoetFriend, thank you for your gift of friendship that you share... JamesMichael, you went and got me smiling this morning seeing your response and thank you for taking the time to reply... Melissa, my east coast PoetFriend, your responses ALWAYS seem to give me a hug from the inside and I thank you for this sweetie... Janet, you're too sweet ya know that eh and I'm soooo glad to be back too and BearHugs2u dearPoetFriend... Paula, I missed you too sweetie, and now that things have settled down here, I'm glad I'm back cus there's no other place in those quiet moments that I have to myself that I'd rather be than rite here among trusted friends and beautiful poetry... WanderingGlider, it is the love for the one who had left her in the cold bitter dark of yesterdays that remains in blanket of snow atop ridge of fantasy... It's all about that one true love or so she thought and how she dealt with moving on, be it by momentary flashbacks of fantasy where she is reminded of the intense feelings she experienced, and upon reflecting back on yesterdays it seemed to have given her the inner strength to face beginnings of new todays |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ this almost got by me! This is wonderful......so beautifully expressed! SEA |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
coco's got an open heart. what about an open check book write me a million love notes all day. nice one o yuh |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Coco....this is wonderful....but you knew that.... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sea, thank you for your sweet reply and hugs2uAlways... Walt, you're adorable yuh know that eh and I thank you PoetFriend... Sunshine, your response touched my heart dearPoetFriend and I thank you... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful... I enjoyed it very much! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya Suthern, thankyou for your kind reply I appreciate your feedback very much Hugs2uPoetFriend |
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