Open Poetry #13 |
Soulmate of my dreams |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
With a poetical smile you stole my heart and now my life will never be the same. With sultry text you caress my soul through the dark and lonely night melting the sadness far away Our love is far beyond romantic definition for you are the soulmate of dreams You are the princess who holds the keys to my heart for all eternity Even if dreams are all we can ever hope to be then may we sleep forever so you can always be with me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Brad.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Our love is far beyond romantic definition a wonderful 2 lines, Brad ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very romantic, if we can only meet in dreams, may we sleep forever... paraphrase of your wonderful idea truly enjoyed reading your heart |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
......and today you give me this gem to tuck away into my heart...as well as my library SEA |
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PoeticaL Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50 |
awwwwwwwwwwwww Brad......... You're the best darkness I have ever known. The best. "I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith" |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you. Smiles at poeticaL and goes to sleep |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
ohhh This is so romantic. Looking forward to reading more |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
even if dreams are all we can ever hope to be,then may we sleep forever, I loved this line. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh man oh man oh man oh man!!! ***whew*** [wiping sweat from brow] ... you tell her, darkone.... how wonderful you write!!! what a special blissful gift.... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you I'm sure she liked it very much |
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