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Anticipating Release.............
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Anticipating Release............. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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The clouds gathered sometime in the night......... as light tries to pentretrate the dark grey morning I see the heaviness feel the heaviness of this day outside you can smell the rain even though it hasn't arrived yet anticipation...... I'm waiting for more than the rain it seems I keep having deja` vu's memories of things I haven't done yet every time it rains I feel this storm of emotions inside me wild..... impatient...... excited..... I can hear the thunder (I'm so ready for this) I want this I need this release ~SEA~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Emotions are much like weather, ever changing and ranging from gentle breeze to violent storm. Love the imagery! Going to have this in my library! damn it janet! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Give in to your feelings SEA, give in, you'll thank me later. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing what those electricals urges...er....charges, can stir up! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Brad~ thank you....so nice to be in your library  PK~ believe me, I do give in to my feelings........the rain just seems to intensify them... Sunshine~ the air is thick this morning...like in Florida..... I love it!! ( come on rain) ~SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thunder rumbles, lightning crashes pulse quickens, breaths become shorter rain comes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sumthin' like that? Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yipes...kaboom |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ yea, something just like that....I've been to Texas too.....you have the best thunder and lightning storms there Walt~ definately kaboom! ~SEA |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lightning like flashes of excitement. Nice There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very nice, SEA. You have to love the power and anticipation of the storm. All writing comes |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jamie~ thanks LW~ exactly! and ohhh yes, I do! thanks ~SEA |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
SEA - I do too.....love the write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ask and you shall receive   very very cool poem Sea-girlie ... dance in the rain darlin |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jill~ thank you Janet~ LOVE that picture!! breath-taking! Thank you ~SEA |
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