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Love me in the Light
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Love me in the Light |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Do not love me in just the night But love me by the light of day If our love is true, it can live in the light If your words are true and your heart is right Your love of me will not decay Do not love me in just the night I promise to stand beside you until our lives twilight Our love will keep the wolves at bay If our love is true, it can live in the light The love we share will bring us great delight My love for you will never let me be led astray Do not love me in just the night Our dreams and fantasies will forever be in sight A bed of roses will be our daily bouquet If our love is true, it can live in the light My love of you, your love will incite I will love you forever and a day Do not love me in just the night If our love is true, it can live in the light |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Alan, Oh, yes she should love you in the light of day! Hope your love is strong enough for both of you. Hugs, ME |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like when it lasts from night and INTO the day!  Lovely work Alan! Sounds like a good thing to me! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
True, true....nothing like a little afternoon delight {~,^} |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful writing....nice flow and rhymes schemes...I loved that bouquet line...brilliant piece! Nathan |
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PoeticaL Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50 |
yep I always leave the lights on... ;-) "I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith" |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
awesome, I love this, and it's so true. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, if someone cannot acknowledge me openly, forget it. Thanks for a great read. Kathleen Blake |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I want to thank each and everyone of you for your kind comments. This is my first one here in a long time. I see now why I had to come back. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Alan, This is very good! I liked it a lot. You want love in the light, I want love at night. If we were together, we'd have no time to fight!  Kitty If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! [This message has been edited by Kitty** (edited 04-06-2001).] |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Very nice Alan. Love should be a 24 hr thing. Let the cover of night fill you with pleasent dreams and the openess of the day fill your hearts with laughter. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Alan...I'm so glad you posted this...you have said exactly how I feel...love me openly for all to see...thank you "If you are going to walk on thin ice, you might as well dance!" |
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