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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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Under a blanket of stars I feel you. You come to me, soft and serene Comforting, loving. I imagine you with me Imagining with me, laughing with me. As a star falls The imagining ceases. Reality is you have gone. You are the stars that fill my sky, The breeze that kisses my cheek You are with me always. So I look to the stars On clear nights Hoping to catch glipmse of you And I do. You are so beautiful And always near. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mariee, I couldn't let this lovely poem drop into the depths without a comment. Sad and sweet, beautifully done. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such delicate and tender sentiments Mariee, just lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As a star falls The imagining ceases. Reality is you have gone. You are the stars that fill my sky, The breeze that kisses my cheek You are with me always. So I look to the stars On clear nights Hoping to catch glipmse of you And I do. You are so beautiful And always near. ========================== yes... ever near ... lovely imagery laced in soft spoken emotions very nice marie |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
mariee66, I just love this type of poetry. Very warm emotionally. Parker |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks for all the kind comments. It's been a while since I've written anything...my muse was on hiatus! This one is special--it holds a lot of meaning for me. Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ This is clearly a beauty from the depths of your heart ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's the best poetry to write, Mariee, when they mean something to you.... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"Hoping to catch glipmse of you And I do." I think this is the best part of this write. Wanting, Wishing and recieving even if only while looking up. I feel the absense. Beautiful write Mariee, Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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PortuguesePoet Junior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 34 |
A warm poem full of love, something to keep the bed warm...Good Work.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is wonderful. . . always nice to see one that's special. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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