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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-05-01 05:32 PM

The realization comes slowly
That I don’t know what is real
I don’t know what I want
Don’t know what I feel
The weight is heavy upon me
Holding onto a sinking stone
With the knowledge
That inside, we are all alone
And in order to be healed
We have to stand in rain
In order to pay our penance
We have to endure the pain

The water washes over me
Washing me clean
I am starting out fresh again
Somewhere in the in-between
Until I feel the need again
Moving from left to right,
I feel the need to be cleaned
By the rain tonight

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-05-01 05:42 PM

I think when our 50% chance of rain materializes tonight, I shall stand out in it, and think of these lines.

Chances are, I'll feel better for it.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2001-05-01 05:42 PM

enjoy as always

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

3 posted 2001-05-01 06:08 PM

I'll echo that thought. A very nice write, PK. Flows beautifully.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-01 06:52 PM

When the rain comes my friend. . . I will walk with you. . .

You always seem to know don't you???

Excellent. . .

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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-05-01 07:20 PM

I responded to another writer a while back, there could not have been Easter Sunday without Good Friday. This poem captivates that at least for me, Thanks again.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-01-2001).]

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

6 posted 2001-05-01 08:14 PM

like i am so fond of saying,
we all got our demons.
everyone's got somethin to atone for.

i know just how you feel.

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-05-01 08:17 PM

"That inside, we are all alone
And in order to be healed
We have to stand in rain
In order to pay our penance
We have to endure the pain"

I felt this very much....makes me wish like heck for some rain to come my way tonight.....

this is amazing...and yea, wow

SEA

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